I’m a pretty passive person, I don’t get too excited about stuff, generally tend to go with the flow. That might work for me, however it’s not going to work for my writing. I had a very insightful phone conversation with my editor last night, I give thanks for her wisdom. Now I have to scour my work and up the active sentences. More show, less tell. That seems like an easy enough concept, but I find it a struggle to even recognize a passive sentence, never mind fix it, lol. Didn’t sleep too much last night, thinking about this. No one ever said this writing business was going to be easy.